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December 11, 2012
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Yeah, it's about time I get back into doing these requests. I actually wrote a list out for myself.

VocalMetroid's OCs Deloris (Blonde) and Debbie (Red-head) [link]
He asked me to draw them in a turtleneck.
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Critique by ~jackmcslay Dec 12, 2012, 5:54:16 AM
I think the problem is not their thighs but their pelvis. The crotch is too high and the hips too narrow, causing their thighs to stick out in a very odd manner. Had you made a larger pelvis, their thighs would flow much more naturally. Also, it seems debbie's neck is misaligned mith the base of her head and the ear is too close to her eye. For the sweater, the fold between their necks seems weird and purposeless and there really shouldn't be cleavage when wearing sweaters. And the shoulders seem a bit overkill, they curve way too much to appear natural. Yes, sweaters should look wavy when you wear them , but not that much.

But in overall, I'm impressed, this seems quite better anatomically than your average artwork as the errors are mostly on details
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~VocalMetroid Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it. Could be better on the thighs, though, but such wide hips ARE a challenge. The upper body, however, is near flawless.

Think I should maybe put up a rendition of this?
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*xcesskinavira Dec 12, 2012
sure
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Mood: Love ~rockingEmo739 Dec 11, 2012
Those thighs,lol :D
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*xcesskinavira Dec 12, 2012
yeah, a little lower body fail there ^^'
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~Darkgon01 Apr 6, 2013
Daw, don't worry man, practice makes perfect.
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~dafk189 Dec 11, 2012
You must have a big list of requests, huh?
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*xcesskinavira Dec 12, 2012
Indeed, but I've finally found the determination to get them done. The thing is, I don't want to speed through requests, because it shows lack of interest towards my watchers. I feel their characters should look better than mine, ya know?
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~joshpoint0 Dec 11, 2012
awesome :D
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*xcesskinavira Dec 12, 2012
Thanks, mate =^J
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~joshpoint0 Dec 12, 2012
Ur welcome :3
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